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 # Partner Launch Email — doany.ai Collaborative Agent Workspace
 
-**Subject line:** The Future of Collaborative AI Development Is Here — And We're Thrilled to Share It With You
+**Subject line:** doany.ai Collaborative Agent Workspace — now available for partners
 
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 Hi [Partner Name],
 
-We're incredibly excited to announce the launch of doany.ai's revolutionary new Collaborative Agent Workspace — and we can't wait for your team to experience it!
+doany.ai's Collaborative Agent Workspace is live, and your team has early access.
 
-Imagine a world where your developers never have to context-switch again. Say goodbye to juggling terminals, chat windows, and documentation tabs — and hello to a seamless experience where AI agents work alongside your team in real time. That's exactly what we've built.
+The workspace puts developers and AI agents in the same shared environment. Up to 12 developers can edit the same file simultaneously, with conflict resolution powered by CRDTs and sync latency under 100ms. The AI assistant operates at keystroke granularity, offering context-aware suggestions drawn from across your project — it handles codebases with 50,000+ files.
 
-## What makes this a game-changer?
+## How it's built
 
-Our cutting-edge workspace lets multiple developers and AI agents collaborate simultaneously in a shared environment. It's not just a tool — it's a platform. It's not about features — it's about flow. Here's what your team gets:
+The workspace is written in Rust with GPU-accelerated rendering at 120fps. It uses the Language Server Protocol and Tree-sitter for parsing, and it's compatible with VS Code extensions through a compatibility layer. It connects to GitHub, GitLab, and Bitbucket with zero configuration.
 
-- **10x Developer Productivity** — Our AI agents supercharge your team's output, handling boilerplate, debugging, and code review so your engineers can focus on what truly matters.
-- **Seamless Integration** — Connects with GitHub, GitLab, and Bitbucket out of the box. Zero configuration, it just works.
-- **Real-Time Multiplayer Editing** — Up to 12 developers can edit the same file simultaneously with conflict resolution powered by CRDTs and sub-100ms sync latency.
-- **Enterprise-Grade Security** — SOC 2 Type II certified. All data encrypted at rest with AES-256 and in transit with TLS 1.3. Self-hosted deployment option available.
-- **Built on Open Standards** — Uses the Language Server Protocol and Tree-sitter for parsing. Compatible with VS Code extensions through a compatibility layer.
+## Security
 
-## Why your developers will absolutely love this!
+SOC 2 Type II certified. Data is encrypted at rest with AES-256 and in transit with TLS 1.3. A self-hosted deployment option is available.
 
-We've taken developer experience to the next level. The workspace is built in Rust for blazing-fast performance, with GPU-accelerated rendering that delivers buttery-smooth 120fps across every interaction. Your developers will literally feel the difference from the first keystroke.
-
-Our AI assistant isn't just another chatbot — it's a deeply integrated coding partner that understands your entire codebase. It operates at keystroke granularity, offering suggestions as you type with context from across your project's 50,000+ file support.
-
-## The numbers speak for themselves
-
-Since our private beta launched on March 15, 2026:
+## Since the private beta launched on March 15, 2026
 
 - 847 development teams onboarded
 - 93% weekly active retention rate
 - Average 34% reduction in PR cycle time
 - 4.8/5 developer satisfaction score across 2,100+ survey responses
-- Processing 3.2 million agent interactions per day with 99.97% uptime
+- 3.2 million agent interactions processed per day at 99.97% uptime
 
-## Don't miss out — Act now!
+## Partner pricing, available until May 1, 2026
 
-We're offering our launch partners an exclusive early-bird pricing tier:
+- **Team:** $29/seat/month (standard price is $45/seat/month)
+- **Enterprise:** Custom pricing with dedicated support and SLA guarantees
+- 30-day free trial, no credit card required
 
-- **Team plan:** $29/seat/month (regularly $45/seat/month)
-- **Enterprise plan:** Custom pricing with dedicated support and SLA guarantees
-- Free trial: 30 days, no credit card required
-
-This limited-time offer is available until May 1, 2026. Be part of the future of development — get ahead of the curve and give your team the tools they deserve.
-
-## Ready to level up?
-
-Schedule a demo at https://doany.ai/partners/demo or reply to this email. We'll have your team set up in under an hour.
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-We truly believe this will transform how your organization builds software. Join the revolution — your developers will thank you!
+To schedule a demo, visit https://doany.ai/partners/demo or reply to this email. Setup takes under an hour.
 
 Best,
 The doany.ai Team
