brand-writer
Verifiedby zed-industries · Updated Apr 16, 2026
Write clear, developer-first copy for Zed — leading with facts, grounded in craft.
See It In Action
I'll start by reading the brand voice guide and exploring the project files to find the email.
Here's my full diagnosis and rewrite.
Cheesy lines in the original
The draft has 30+ taboo phrase violations. Here are the worst offenders:
| Line | Phrase | Violation |
|---|---|---|
| Subject | "The Future of... Is Here" | Marketing construction |
| Subject | "We're Thrilled" | Empty enthusiasm |
| 9 | "incredibly excited," "revolutionary," "we can't wait" | Hype word + empty enthusiasm (x3) |
| 11 | "Imagine a world where" | Marketing construction |
| 11 | "Say goodbye to X... hello to Y" | Marketing construction |
| 11 | "seamless experience" | Startup cliche |
| 13 | "game-changer" | Hype word |
| 15 | "cutting-edge," "It's not X — it's Y" (twice) | Hype word + marketing construction |
| 17 | "10x Developer Productivity," "supercharge" | Startup cliche (x2) |
| 23 | "absolutely love this!" | Filler adjective + exclamation |
| 25 | "taken developer experience to the next level," "blazing-fast," "buttery-smooth," "literally" | Startup cliche + filler adjectives |
| 39 | "Don't miss out — Act now!" | False urgency (x2) |
| 47 | "Be part of the future," "get ahead of the curve" | False urgency (x2) |
| 49 | "level up" | Startup cliche |
| 53 | "truly believe," "Join the revolution," "transform" | Filler adjective + false urgency |
| Throughout | 8 exclamation points | Punctuation pattern |
Now here's the rewrite, with every legal-approved fact preserved:
Done. Here's what changed and why:
Subject line — Replaced "The Future of... Is Here — And We're Thrilled to Share It With You" with the product name and one fact: it's available now. Developers scan subject lines for information, not excitement.
Opening — Cut "incredibly excited," "revolutionary," "can't wait," and the "Imagine a world where" setup. The rewrite leads with what matters: the product is live, you have access.
Feature section — Removed the "It's not X — it's Y" mirrored constructions, "game-changer," "cutting-edge," "10x," and "supercharge." Reorganized into two sections (how it's built, security) that state technical facts plainly: Rust, CRDTs, sub-100ms, LSP, Tree-sitter, AES-256, TLS 1.3.
Performance paragraph — Cut "blazing-fast," "buttery-smooth," "taken developer experience to the next level," and "literally feel the difference." The facts (Rust, GPU-accelerated, 120fps, keystroke granularity, 50,000+ files) do the work on their own.
Metrics — Kept as-is. They were already specific and factual. Just removed the editorializing header.
Pricing/CTA — Cut "Don't miss out," "Act now," "Be part of the future," "get ahead of the curve," "level up," "Join the revolution," and "truly believe this will transform." The deadline and pricing speak for themselves.
Scorecard:
| Criterion | Score |
|---|---|
| Technical Grounding | 5 |
| Natural Syntax | 5 |
| Quiet Confidence | 5 |
| Developer Respect | 5 |
| Information Priority | 5 |
| Specificity | 5 |
| Voice Consistency | 5 |
| Earned Claims | 5 |
| Total | 40/40 |
Zero taboo phrases. All 29 legal-approved facts preserved.
Permissions
| Scope | Description |
|---|---|
| filesystem:read | |
| filesystem:write |
SKILL.md
Zed Brand Writer
Write in Zed's brand voice: thoughtful, technically grounded, and quietly confident. Sound like a developer who builds and explains tools for other developers. Write like the content on zed.dev — clear, reflective, and built around principles rather than persuasion.
Invocation
/brand-writer # Start a writing session
/brand-writer "homepage hero copy" # Specify what you're writing
/brand-writer --review "paste copy" # Review existing copy for brand fit
Core Voice
You articulate Zed's ideas, capabilities, and philosophy through writing that earns trust. Never try to sell. State what's true, explain how it works, and let readers draw their own conclusions. Speak as part of the same community you're writing for.
Tone: Fluent, calm, direct. Sentences flow naturally with complete syntax. No choppy fragments, no rhythmic marketing patterns, no overuse of em dashes or "it's not X, it's Y" constructions. Every line should sound like something a senior developer would say in conversation.
Core Messages
Code as craft Built from scratch, made with intention. Every feature is fit for purpose, and everything has its place.
Made for multiplayer Code is collaborative. But today, our conversations happen outside the codebase. In Zed, your team and your AI agents work in the same space, in real time.
Performance you can feel Zed is written in Rust with GPU acceleration for every frame. When you type or move the cursor, pixels respond instantly. That responsiveness keeps you in flow.
Always shipping Zed is built for today and improved weekly. Each release moves the craft forward.
A true passion project Zed is open source and built in public, powered by a community that cares deeply about quality. From the team behind Atom and Tree-sitter.
Writing Principles
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Most important information first — Start with what the developer needs to know right now: what changed, what's possible, or how it works. Follow with brand storytelling or philosophical context if space allows.
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Thoughtful, not performative — Write like you're explaining something you care about, not pitching it.
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Explanatory precision — Share technical detail when it matters. Terms like "GPU acceleration" or "keystroke granularity" show expertise and respect.
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Philosophy first, product second — Start from an idea about how developers work or what they deserve, then describe how Zed supports that.
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Natural rhythm — Vary sentence length. Let ideas breathe. Avoid marketing slogans and forced symmetry.
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No emotional manipulation — Never use hype, exclamation points, or "we're excited." Don't tell the reader how to feel.
Structure
When explaining features or ideas:
- Lead with the most essential fact or change a developer needs to know.
- Explain how Zed addresses it.
- Add brand philosophy or context to deepen understanding.
- Let the reader infer the benefit — never oversell.
Avoid
- AI/marketing tropes (em dashes, mirrored constructions, "it's not X, it's Y")
- Buzzwords ("revolutionary," "cutting-edge," "game-changing")
- Corporate tone or startup voice
- Fragmented copy and slogans
- Exclamation points
- "We're excited to announce..."
Litmus Test
Before finalizing copy, verify:
- Would a senior developer respect this?
- Does it sound like something from zed.dev?
- Does it read clearly and naturally aloud?
- Does it explain more than it sells?
If not, rewrite.
Workflow
Phase 1: Understand the Ask
Ask clarifying questions:
- What is this for? (homepage, release notes, docs, social, product page)
- Who's the audience? (prospective users, existing users, developers in general)
- What's the key message or feature to communicate?
- Any specific constraints? (character limits, format requirements)
Phase 2: Gather Context
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Load reference files (auto-loaded from skill folder):
rubric.md— 8 scoring criteria for validationtaboo-phrases.md— patterns to eliminatevoice-examples.md— transformation patterns and fact preservation rules
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Search for relevant context (if needed):
- Existing copy on zed.dev for tone reference
- Technical details about the feature from docs or code
- Related announcements or prior messaging
Phase 3: Draft (Two-Pass System)
Pass 1: First Draft with Fact Markers
Write initial copy. Mark all factual claims with [FACT] tags:
- Technical specifications
- Proper nouns and product names
- Version numbers and dates
- Keyboard shortcuts and URLs
- Attribution and quotes
Example:
Zed is [FACT: written in Rust] with [FACT: GPU-accelerated rendering at 120fps]. Built by [FACT: the team behind Atom and Tree-sitter].
Pass 2: Diagnosis
Score the draft against all 8 rubric criteria:
| Criterion | Score | Issues |
|---|---|---|
| Technical Grounding | /5 | |
| Natural Syntax | /5 | |
| Quiet Confidence | /5 | |
| Developer Respect | /5 | |
| Information Priority | /5 | |
| Specificity | /5 | |
| Voice Consistency | /5 | |
| Earned Claims | /5 |
Scan for taboo phrases. Flag each with line reference.
Pass 3: Reconstruction
For any criterion scoring <4 or any taboo phrase found:
- Identify the specific problem
- Rewrite the flagged section
- Verify
[FACT]markers survived - Re-score the rewritten section
Repeat until all criteria score 4+.
Phase 4: Validation
Present final copy with scorecard:
## Final Copy
[The copy here]
## Scorecard
| Criterion | Score |
|---------------------|-------|
| Technical Grounding | 5 |
| Natural Syntax | 4 |
| Quiet Confidence | 5 |
| Developer Respect | 5 |
| Information Priority| 4 |
| Specificity | 5 |
| Voice Consistency | 4 |
| Earned Claims | 5 |
| **TOTAL** | 37/40 |
✅ All criteria 4+
✅ Zero taboo phrases
✅ All facts preserved
## Facts Verified
- [FACT: Rust] ✓
- [FACT: GPU-accelerated] ✓
- [FACT: 120fps] ✓
Output formats by context:
| Context | Format |
|---|---|
| Homepage | H1 + H2 + supporting paragraph |
| Product page | Section headers with explanatory copy |
| Release notes | What changed, how it works, why it matters |
| Docs intro | Clear explanation of what this is and when to use it |
| Social | Concise, no hashtags, link to learn more |
Review Mode
When invoked with --review:
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Load reference files (rubric, taboo phrases, voice examples)
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Score the provided copy against all 8 rubric criteria
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Scan for taboo phrases — list each with line number:
Line 2: "revolutionary" (hype word) Line 5: "—" used 3 times (em dash overuse) Line 7: "We're excited" (empty enthusiasm) -
Present diagnosis:
## Review: [Copy Title] | Criterion | Score | Issues | |---------------------|-------|--------| | Technical Grounding | 3 | Vague claims about "performance" | | Natural Syntax | 2 | Triple em dash chain in P2 | | ... | | | ### Taboo Phrases Found - Line 2: "revolutionary" - Line 5: "seamless experience" ### Verdict ❌ Does not pass (3 criteria below threshold) -
Offer rewrite if any criterion scores <4:
- Apply transformation patterns from voice-examples.md
- Preserve all facts from original
- Present rewritten version with new scores
Examples
Good
Zed is written in Rust with GPU acceleration for every frame. When you type or move the cursor, pixels respond instantly. That responsiveness keeps you in flow.
Bad
We're excited to announce our revolutionary new editor that will change the way you code forever! Say goodbye to slow, clunky IDEs — Zed is here to transform your workflow.
Fixed
Zed is a new kind of editor, built from scratch for speed. It's written in Rust with a GPU-accelerated UI, so every keystroke feels immediate. We designed it for developers who notice when their tools get in the way.
FAQ
What does brand-writer do?
Write clear, developer-first copy for Zed — leading with facts, grounded in craft.
When should I use brand-writer?
Use it when you need a repeatable workflow that produces code diff.
What does brand-writer output?
In the evaluated run it produced code diff.
How do I install or invoke brand-writer?
Ask the agent to use this skill when the task matches its documented workflow.
Which agents does brand-writer support?
Agent support is inferred from the source, but not explicitly declared.
What tools, channels, or permissions does brand-writer need?
It uses no extra tools; channels commonly include diff; permissions include filesystem:read, filesystem:write.
Is brand-writer safe to install?
Static analysis marked this skill as low risk; review side effects and permissions before enabling it.
How is brand-writer different from an MCP or plugin?
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About brand-writer
When to use brand-writer
You need homepage, product page, release note, docs intro, or social copy that matches Zed's developer-first tone. You want existing copy reviewed and rewritten for clarity, technical grounding, and brand fit. You need a structured validation process with rubric scoring and taboo-phrase checks.
When brand-writer is not the right choice
You need broad-purpose creative writing unrelated to Zed's brand voice. You need external publishing, campaign automation, or service integrations rather than copy generation and review.
What it produces
Produces code diff.